please make two posts per project, one for research and one for final delivery. alot of your images werent showing so i didnt get a good feel for your research phase on top of the fact that you didnt write much but i did see your rough draft. your final delivery is very similar to your rough draft, please put more effort into upgrading your graphics and also use naming conventions for post titles as per syllabus. the final image has the beginnings of a nice layout, and look and feel. the side borders need to be integrated better with the top and bottom borders. maybe make the hands black and white like the children or vice versa. then maybe give alittle more room between that border and the central information by making the border narrower. shows good potential just needs to be cleaned up for that next level of quality.
please make two posts per project, one for research and one for final delivery. alot of your images werent showing so i didnt get a good feel for your research phase on top of the fact that you didnt write much but i did see your rough draft. your final delivery is very similar to your rough draft, please put more effort into upgrading your graphics and also use naming conventions for post titles as per syllabus. the final image has the beginnings of a nice layout, and look and feel. the side borders need to be integrated better with the top and bottom borders. maybe make the hands black and white like the children or vice versa. then maybe give alittle more room between that border and the central information by making the border narrower. shows good potential just needs to be cleaned up for that next level of quality.
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